Articles | Volume 22, issue 5
https://doi.org/10.5194/os-22-2691-2026
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Current status of ocean observation, ensemble reanalysis and CMIP6 models in describing Antarctic Bottom Water
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2026-978', Anonymous Referee #1, 09 Apr 2026
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ED: Publish as is (18 Aug 2026) by Mario Hoppema
AR by Siran Chen on behalf of the Authors (23 Aug 2026)
This manuscript divides Antarctic Bottom Water (AABW) into three subtypes, WPBW, RSBW, and ALBW, and evaluates their representation in WOA23, an ensemble reanalysis product, and 16 CMIP6 models. The attempt to treat AABW as distinct subtypes is potentially useful, as it addresses the different characteristics of AABW originating from different source regions. The manuscript also brings together a broad range of datasets, which is a strength. However, I do not think the paper is ready for publication in its present form without major revision. My main concerns are that the proposed subtype framework has not yet been shown to be sufficiently robust, the model evaluation remains largely qualitative, and several of the key figures are overloaded and difficult to interpret.
Major comments
1. The proposed subtype framework needs a clearer demonstration of robustness.
The whole paper is built on the subdivision of AABW into WPBW, RSBW, and ALBW using a neutral density threshold and fixed salinity ranges. Since all later comparisons depend on this framework, I think the manuscript needs at least a basic sensitivity analysis showing whether the main subtype patterns remain stable under modest changes in the thresholds. At present, the classification is introduced and then used throughout the paper, but its robustness is not really demonstrated.
2. The evaluation of the reanalysis and CMIP6 models remains too qualitative.
Much of Section 3 relies on visual inspection of maps and uses fairly strong language such as models performing “relatively well”, “capturing” the AABW subtypes, or “failing to capture” them (e.g., Lines 248–267, 343–370). These judgments may be reasonable in a broad sense, but they are not supported by clear quantitative metrics. The paper would be much stronger if the authors added a more objective comparison, for example through a simple quantitative metric. In the present version, some of the model-ranking statements feel more assertive than the evidence shown in the figures.
3. Figures 3–6 are difficult to read.
The multi-panel layout makes each individual panel very small, and it is hard to assess subtype extent or compare models systematically. This is a real problem because these figures are used to support a substantial fraction of the interpretation in Section 3. I would encourage the authors to simplify the presentation, for example, by moving the full model gallery to the Supplement and retaining only a smaller number of representative cases in the main text, ideally together with a summary figure or table that presents the main model differences more efficiently.
Minor comments
1. Line 229: Please clarify Figure 2. The caption states that the subtype distribution is shown for 1993–1998 based on the reanalysis dataset, whereas Section 2 describes the reanalysis product as spanning 1993–2022 (e.g., Line 125). Please explain why only 1993–1998 was used here rather than the full reanalysis period. By contrast, in Figure 1, the WOA23 time period (1991–2020) appears to be consistent with the description in the data section.
2. Line 205: The terminology here should be WOA23 rather than WOA2023.
3. The manuscript would benefit from another careful round of language editing and formatting cleanup before publication. Examples include:
Line 25: “high resolution”→“high-resolution”
Line 40: “under the background of”→“in the context of”
Line 172: “Here”→“here”
Line 211: “Consistent”→“consistent”
Line 279: “reasonably”→“reasonable”
Line 341: “although its spatial”→“although their spatial”
Line 350: “reasonably well position”→“a reasonably good position”
Line 400: “section”→“sections”
Lines 436 and 438: “captures”→“capture”
Line 437: “WAO23”→“WOA23”