Articles | Volume 21, issue 5
https://doi.org/10.5194/os-21-2463-2025
© Author(s) 2025. This work is distributed under
the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.Leading dynamical processes of global marine heatwaves in an ocean state estimate
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-548', Anonymous Referee #1, 22 Apr 2025
- AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Jacopo Sala, 15 May 2025
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-548', Anonymous Referee #2, 27 Jun 2025
- AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Jacopo Sala, 13 Jul 2025
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RC3: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-548', Anonymous Referee #3, 07 Jul 2025
- AC3: 'Reply on RC3', Jacopo Sala, 13 Jul 2025
- EC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-548', Meric Srokosz, 15 Jul 2025
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AR by Jacopo Sala on behalf of the Authors (13 Jul 2025)
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ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (17 Jul 2025) by Meric Srokosz
RR by Anonymous Referee #2 (17 Jul 2025)

RR by Anonymous Referee #3 (03 Aug 2025)

ED: Publish as is (06 Aug 2025) by Meric Srokosz

AR by Jacopo Sala on behalf of the Authors (09 Aug 2025)
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The manuscript presents an effort to characterize the physical drivers of marine heatwaves (MHWs) using the ECCO state estimate framework. The authors should be commended for undertaking the challenge of quantifying the upper ocean heat budget globally and attributing MHWs to specific dynamical processes. However, there are several important concerns that limit confidence in the presented results. First, there is a notable mismatch between the ECCO product and observations, raising questions about the representativeness and reliability of the diagnosed drivers. Second, there are questions regarding the heat budget closure and identification of dominant processes, complicating the interpretation of the contributions from different terms. These issues, along with several concerns related to the interpretation and presentation of results, warrant further consideration and clarification.
Major concerns:
Other comments:
Page 7, The claim that "ECCO provides an overall good representation..." is somewhat overstated. ECCO underestimates the magnitude of the trend in the Northwest Pacific, Northwest Atlantic, and Southwest Atlantic. The spatial patterns in MHW metrics also show clear mismatches in Figures 3–6.
Page 9, The statement that "intensity is slightly underestimated..." is problematic. ECCO upper ocean heat content and OISST surface temperatures are not directly comparable.
Page 10, “In these regions” should be “in other regions”?
Page 11, “Figure 8a d” should be “Figure 7a d”.
Page 11, “consistent with the onset phase being on average longer than the decline phase (Figure 4).” Why longer duration means overall pattern being similar to that of onset, especially the counter-argument is made later in the same paragraph? Besides, Figure 4 doesn’t show onset vs decline.
Page 14, “How often each budget terms is "the" leading term vs "a" leading term (excluding overlap with "the") across NEP, SWP, and TASMAN regions”. The definition of “the” and “a” leading term needs to be clearly explained.
Pages 15-18, Figures 11-13: 1. the percentage contribution should be based on the total temperature change, i.e., , where is the temperature change during onset or decline, so the contribution from one term can exceed 100%, if there is one negative term or more. 2. the numbers are only meaningful if the heat budget is closed, that is, equals . Otherwise, if there are residuals in the budget, these numbers are less meaningful.
Pages 15-18: all the numbers depend on how the percentage of the heat budget terms are calculated, and the threshold used for ranking contributors.